Reviews For Beautiful War

Name: gttnrdy2write (Signed) · Datum: 12/29/2014 13:39:09 · For: Chapter One: Alive

I really love this story.  Please, please continue!!!!

Name: Louise crowther (Signed) · Datum: 10/19/2014 11:25:18 · For: Chapter Fifteen: Fully Completely

Really liked this chapter. When's the next one coming?

Author's Response:

At the present time, I don't have the next chapters written. I know what's going to happen in the rest of the story, even if I don't have it all written down yet. I'm hoping to work on the last few chapters so I can post them soon, but I really am not sure when they'll be posted. I didn't want to rush through the last few chapters I posted, but I wanted to get them up, especially the most recent one, because I didn't like where the story left off - with Annie heartbroken and Eyal so pissed at her, he couldn't even look at her.

I hope the latest chapter I posted cleared up any questions or issues that were unclear in previous chapters (like why Eyal wouldn't listen to Annie when she was trying to explain things before he kicked her out of his apartment). If you still have questions that weren't answered in the story, don't hesitate to ask, and I can clarify things that might not have made sense or weren't explained in the story.

I appreciate all comments, criticisms, and feedback for my stories. Thanks again for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

- Desert_Rose14

Name: Louise crowther (Signed) · Datum: 09/29/2014 01:59:22 · For: Chapter Thirteen: Lost

Thank you for the update. Looking forward to the next chapters!

Name: Louise crowther (Signed) · Datum: 09/27/2014 12:02:44 · For: Chapter Twelve: Sexy Mistake

Please would you update this, I am really enjoying it but don't get why eyal won't listen. 

Author's Response:

Hello. Thanks for reading my story! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'm sorry that I haven't been able to update the story for a few weeks - I've been quite busy with work and school, and haven't had much time to write. It's very hard for me to leave readers hanging, especially when the latest chapter doesn't leave things on the best of terms with the characters, because I don't want people to think that's where the story ends. (Until you see "The End," you'll know that the story isn't finished yet.)

The reason why Eyal is so angry with Annie is because of the way she treated him - he's hurt that she thinks them sleeping together was wrong, but he's more upset that she blamed it on him - that his longing and lust for her caused them to sleep together far too early into their relationship. In upcoming chapters, both characters give their perspectives on the situation, so perhaps that might clarify your confusion with Eyal; however, your confusion is meant to mirror the confusion Annie's feeling - she too doesn't understand why Eyal wouldn't even hear her out. I understand that on the show, Eyal always listens to Annie, and that they are always able to work through their problems. But I wanted this to be one time she pushes him too far, because she has pushed him pretty far in the past. This time, the way she treated him was too much for him that he just didn't want to deal with her "games" any longer, which is why he dismissed her and threw her out of his apartment.

I don't want to give away too much, but hopefully the chapters that reveal both Annie and Eyal's perspectives on their "falling out" will be able to clear things up for you. Also, at the risk of a potential spoiler here, I'll say that at some point, Eyal addresses why he didn't listen to Annie, but I won't say much more than that because I don't want to ruin the story for you.

Again, thanks for your response. I'm always open to feedback and comments from my readers. If you ever have any questions about my stories, please don't hesitate to ask. I've also added a new chapter to this story, so I hope it'll be posted sometime tomorrow (Sunday). I'm currently working on the next few chapters, so hopefully those will be posted soon as well.

Thanks for reading!


Name: dedisgirl (Signed) · Datum: 07/26/2014 07:26:42 · For: Chapter Ten: Bold As Love

This story is truly beautiful. You do such a wonderful job with these characters in letting them learn the truth and discover what they've known all along. This is the ending I would want for them. Thank you for giving it to us.

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